First Blog

Hi everyone. My name is Nick and this is my first blog on Treesong.com. There's not really anything that I have to say right now, but if you wanna start a conversation than drop me a line. There is one thing though: I have a poem that I'm posting below. If you like it let me know, if you don't then some constructive criticism would be appreciated. thanks.
-Nick

Natures Kiss

Here again at this beautiful place, I sit Here staring into natures face.
Some leaves have already turned and fallen from an elder tree.
Many shades of gold, orange, and light browns form a very peaceful looking dance floor around this spot.
The sun toasts the back of my neck lightly.
As I sit Here a breeze comes to cool me now and again.

Looking to the sky, one can see to the top of the elder tree.
The turned leaves continue to fall slowly, but not to worry about this friendly tree being naked. It's not shy.

People walk by, and don't realize what they miss. Two pretty girls on the other side of the tree, among its beauty and grace. They don't know that it's moments like this that could be called natures kiss.